I really liked your Morpheus principles. They are especially effective as a person can remember the vividness of the story in order to recall these truths. One aspect I have learned from Substack is that writers tend to present their main points initially in order to keep readers who might otherwise move to other stacks. I might suggest starting with your main idea or a bulllet point list of what will follow. It’s a different format than a sermon that would allow a writer to have that meta dialogue with the audience at first. Just a suggestion.

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